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How to Write Vividly Well — Michael Connelly

How to Write Vividly Well — Michael Connelly

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This episode is presented by Mercury, the banking platform that makes this show possible. I can’t imagine trying to run my business without them. Learn more at https://mercury.com Michael Connelly is a crime novelist famous for series like 'Harry Bosch' and 'The Lincoln Lawyer'. Combined, his series have sold more than 100 million books, and they've become TV shows on Netflix, MGM, and Amazon Prime, where he's not just writing but is also the executive producer. His fingerprints are all over the work. I wanted to ask him how he dreams up vivid characters and how he writes about a city, a town, or a place. If you want to write, come up with stories, imagine worlds and put them onto the page, you're in the right place. 00:00:00 Introduction 00:01:51 The 'Telling Details' trick 00:04:45 Michael's rewriting process 00:07:39 Fiction vs truth 00:09:54 Michael's writing routine 00:11:02 Character above all else 00:12:46 Why Michael loves writing LA 00:16:10 Michael's favorite book chapter 00:20:47 How to write in different voices 00:24:06 The best piece of advice for writers 00:27:59 When the place becomes a character 00:29:16 Every murder is a city's story 00:34:28 The origin of Harry Bosch 00:41:01 Why dialogue needs to be cut 00:47:13 Heroes vs villains 00:52:14 How to hooks readers 00:56:50 Books vs TV 01:00:43 Inside a Hollywood writer's room 01:06:06 Advice for junior writers 01:09:20 Have readers changed *About the host* Hey! I’m David Perell and I’m a writer, teacher, and podcaster. I believe writing online is one of the biggest opportunities in the world today. For the first time in human history, everybody can freely share their ideas with a global audience. I seek to help as many people publish their writing online as possible. *Follow me* Apple: https://podcasts.apple.com/us/podcast/how-i-write/id1700171470 YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@DavidPerellChannel Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/show/2DjMSboniFAeGA8v9NpoPv X: https://x.com/david_perell

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0:00 - 0:27
0:27 duration68 words

Introduction to Michael Connelly

Michael Connelly discusses his background as a crime novelist and the process behind his popular series.

"Michael Connelly is a crime novelist who's famous for series like Harry Bosch and The Lincoln Lawyer. And combined his series have sold more than a hundred million books. But then also they've become ..."

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0:27 - 1:11
0:44 duration161 words

Sponsorship and Writing Journey

An overview of sponsorship from Mercury and how it helps in managing finances and running a business, which leads into writing.

"How do you dream up vivid characters? How do you write about a city, a town, or a place? And if you're somebody you want to write, you want to come up with stories. You want to imagine worlds and put ..."

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1:11 - 1:51
0:40 duration131 words

Banking Experience with Mercury

Discusses the ease of banking with Mercury and the tools it provides for effective business management.

"I switched over from other more traditional banks because Mercury is so well-designed. It's easy to get started. It's easy to use while also feeling totally legit and secure. And Mercury gives me all ..."

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1:51 - 3:41
1:50 duration235 words

Creating Vivid Characters

Connelly shares insights on how he creates and observes details to develop his characters authentically.

"All right, back to the episode. I want to hear about detail. What do you focus on when it comes to details bringing stories to life? And what is it that writers get wrong? I spend a lot of time with t..."

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3:41 - 4:45
1:04 duration173 words

Observing Details for Character Building

Connelly illustrates how small observational details can tell a lot about a character's personality and situation.

"And that's what I mean by telling detail. Instead of five details, you pick the one that says something about the situation, the character. You know, I I often tell this story. I was one time sitting ..."

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4:45 - 6:05
1:20 duration196 words

Editing and Revisions Process

Connelly shares the significance of editing in refining details and maintaining a story's momentum during the rewriting phase.

"Yeah. as you're as you're writing detail and you're working through drafts, do you feel like those details are something that come out in the editing process and the rewriting, the rewriting, okay, ok..."

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6:05 - 6:48
0:43 duration250 words

The Process of Rewriting

Connelly explains his unique process of rewriting, integrating analog and digital methods to enhance his work.

"And how does that work? Is it like okay I got draft one on the left side of my screen. I'm going to rewrite it draft two. Is it like I'm going paragraph by paragraph? How does that rewrite happen? Wel..."

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6:48 - 7:53
1:05 duration120 words

Personal Codes in Editing

Connelly humorously describes his personal shorthand system for editing his manuscripts, reflecting on feedback from his mother.

"like a little personal code language. Yeah. Like uh RW means like rewrite this whole paragraph. NSG means not so good, you know. Um which I got from sadly from my mother once who was reading one of my..."

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7:53 - 9:07
1:14 duration134 words

Truth in Fiction and Research

Connelly discusses the balance between writing fiction and ensuring accuracy in details through research and validation.

"Now, tell me about truth, right? Because at least at the surface, very crude reading. You're like, "Okay, write fiction. Fiction is the opposite of truth." But no, it seems like in your when you're wr..."

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9:07 - 10:38
1:31 duration284 words

Validation Through Experience

Connelly shares his background as a journalist and how it aids in his writing process by minimizing research needs.

"Yeah. I mean, there's two things. One is I was a journalist for a long time before I uh started started doing this. Um I covered courts and I covered crime for about 14 years. So it gives me a kind of..."

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10:38 - 12:10
1:32 duration138 words

Daily Writing Routine

Connelly outlines his structured morning routine for writing, emphasizing the importance of uninterrupted time.

"Okay. So, you're saying always be writing. So, like what's any given Tuesday like? I don't know what you do today. Did you write today? Is it How do you structure your life in order to get writing don..."

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12:10 - 12:30
0:20 duration120 words

Details as Character Development

Connelly explains how details contribute to character development, using real-world knowledge to enhance fiction.

"Um you were talking in the last question about details and I really didn't answer but that the the answer is character. Um, you know I write books about a person a character at the center of a book wh..."

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12:30 - 15:13
2:43 duration231 words

Writing About Los Angeles

Connelly discusses his inspiration from Los Angeles and how its evolving nature influences his writing.

"Yeah. And so I'm constantly picking stuff out of the the real world that's that has happened or is happening to uh put into my books and see how my characters react to it. What do you like so much abo..."

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15:13 - 15:45
0:32 duration193 words

Distinct Features of LA

Connelly identifies the geographic and cultural factors that contribute to the crime narrative in Los Angeles.

"Well, I think it starts with the uniqueness of the places you just have um mentioned. It's got all this stuff. It's got mountains, deserts, uh ocean. Um it the variety is pretty amazing and it's also ..."

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15:45 - 17:12
1:27 duration155 words

Influences from Raymond Chandler

Connelly reflects on the impact of Raymond Chandler's writing in shaping his own perspectives and storytelling in Los Angeles.

"Yeah. I went back and there's a little sisters by Raymond Chandler and I know that that book inspired you. So I just read I think it's your favorite chapter, chapter 13 and this stuck out to me about ..."

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17:12 - 18:16
1:04 duration106 words

Artistry and Realism in Writing

Connelly emphasizes the importance of authentic character portrayal through vivid, real-world details in their settings.

"Um but uh I'm not sure I don't know if it's on there but I think that book was published in 1939 and uh some of those descriptions are are right on right now. And you know to pull that off the you kno..."

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18:16 - 19:46
1:30 duration170 words

Capturing the Essence of Place

Discussion of how specific details about locations reveal character as well as the author's perspective.

"Well, you can see the details you're talking about, right? And I pulled another another quote. Malibu, more movie stars, more pink and blue bathtubs, more tufted beds, more Chanel number five, more Li..."

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19:46 - 21:19
1:33 duration135 words

Productivity Tips and Tools

Connelly reviews tools for productivity, highlighting Basecamp as a beneficial resource for managing writing projects.

"Okay, so we're talking about how do you get your writing done and if you're thinking about work and how you can be more productive there well I recommend a tool called Base Camp. Basecamp is a project..."

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21:19 - 22:50
1:31 duration210 words

Voice Development in Writing

Connelly explains how understanding diction plays a vital role in building unique character voices within his narratives.

"And I had the founder of Base Camp, Jason Freed. He came on the show and I noticed that he really cares about writing. He cares about manifestos. He cares about great copy. He cares about telling a gr..."

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22:50 - 24:22
1:32 duration189 words

Intuition in Character Development

Connelly reflects on his instinctual understanding of his characters, emphasizing the simplicity of his creative process.

"Um but I but that was a that's a character thing. I I didn't want him to say yes or no. I just want him to nod. Um, but I I there's just little I don't know if you want to call them tricks, but there'..."

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24:22 - 25:52
1:30 duration212 words

Conflict as a Driving Force

Connelly discusses how conflict manifests in various forms, contributing to both character depth and plot progression.

"Tell me about conflict. How does conflict let character unfold? Let the story keep that momentum. Well, I would say the uh one of the best pieces of advice I ever read. I didn't get this personally ob..."

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25:52 - 27:23
1:31 duration202 words

Relatable Conflicts in Writing

Connelly shares tactics for incorporating relatable conflicts into narratives to engage readers effectively.

"um you know and uh and again that shows something about character that a in the first place he is a smoker and uh it shows that he's kind of stepped outside of um traditional or standard society and h..."

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27:23 - 28:09
0:46 duration193 words

Depicting Traffic Realistically

Connelly provides insight into how to vividly depict everyday experiences, like traffic, in compelling narrative forms.

"Well, it's like what's your guy doing in in the car while he's not moving because this is LA, you know? Um or what does he do to avoid it? I mean, it gets a little bit like that Saturday like Saturday..."

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28:09 - 31:58
3:49 duration188 words

Place as Character

Exploring how geography and locations contribute meaningfully to character development and storytelling.

"Yeah. How does place um become a character? You know, like even just reading what people have written about your work, they're like, man, the city of Los Angeles is a character. It's not just like the..."

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31:58 - 33:31
1:33 duration143 words

Central Ideas and Themes

Connelly reveals how a central idea, such as technology, plays a significant role in framing the narrative in his recent work.

"I I need an idea I want to explore. You know, I just had a book come out that is a legal thriller, but it's about AI. It's a technology a lot of people don't understand. A lot of people are afraid of...."

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33:31 - 36:34
3:03 duration132 words

Balancing Perspectives in Storytelling

Connelly shares his research process and methods for presenting multiple viewpoints within a courtroom context.

"Well, I did some some research or I should say I had my researchers give me stuff and and and that's what's wonderful about a a courtroom thriller because you have you just bring in witnesses and then..."

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36:34 - 39:36
3:02 duration353 words

Metaphorical Naming

Connelly shares a personal anecdote about the evolution of Harry Bosch's name and its connection to the artist Hieronymus Bosch.

"And uh I mentioned uh Chandler, one of Chandler's essays where he said the detective has to pierce all levels of society. Uh so when I was writing my first published novel, the Harry Bosch novel in th..."

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39:36 - 41:06
1:30 duration60 words

Artistic Experience with Paintings

Connelly shares his personal experiences with famous artworks, reflecting on their significance and impact on his writing sensibility.

"Yeah. The paintings in Madrid at the Praau once I was over there on a book tour and my publishers arranged for me to go into the Praau while I was closed and spend an hour in front of that painting I ..."

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41:06 - 42:36
1:30 duration85 words

Dialogue Dynamics in Fiction

Connelly shares insights into creating realistic dialogue that captures character while maintaining narrative flow.

"Oh, really? My mistake. Wow. Um dialogue, dialogue, dialogue. It's fake, but it's real. It's real, but it's fake. I mean, you're you know, it's so core to what a story is, but also a dialogue in a boo..."

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42:36 - 44:08
1:32 duration118 words

Dialogue Efficiency in Writing

Connelly emphasizes the significance of efficiency in dialogue writing, helping to deliver key information succinctly.

"And so if I quoted like a police detective, the quote had to have information that I felt the reader needed and that wasn't repeated in the body of the story. And um that was, you know, my practice fo..."

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44:08 - 45:39
1:31 duration85 words

Reader Trust and Dialogue Nuance

Connelly discusses his philosophy of trusting readers to understand nuanced dialogues, while navigating editorial expectations.

"the editors generally want things to be more obvious. >> Yeah. Okay. and or uh you know I get the things in the margin about uh wanting more to explain what's going on here. But um um I eminently trus..."

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45:39 - 47:12
1:33 duration267 words

Conflict in Everyday Scenarios

Connelly draws connections between ordinary conversations and larger underlying themes of conflict in relationships, illustrating this through personal anecdotes.

"Yeah. As you were saying that, I was thinking about uh during the holidays every year there's there's there's conflict that shows up in conversations and it's people talking about the stuff going on i..."

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47:12 - 48:42
1:30 duration118 words

Defining Heroism

Connelly emphasizes the importance of heroism in storytelling, focusing on character trials and motivations rather than villain motivations.

"Tell me about uh heroes and villains. How villains magnify the hero and how the hero magnifies the villain. It's funny. I uh I don't spend a lot of time on villains. Um I you know there's writers who ..."

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48:42 - 51:44
3:02 duration347 words

The Moral Battle of Writing

Exploration of the complexities of good and evil in storytelling, focusing on the author's perspective on character motivations.

"you know with Richard Price and Kurt Vonagget and all that. >> What's the bad guy thinking? >> Yeah. You know you might be writing about the good guy. I might be writing about Harry Bosch, but you got..."

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51:44 - 53:16
1:32 duration363 words

Confronting Evil and Chaos

Discusses how characters must confront evil and chaos while exploring deeper philosophical themes in storytelling.

"You know, we were talking about how when you're writing a novel about a murder, most people haven't experienced that. So then you have to make things that are relatable, being in traffic, going to the..."

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53:16 - 54:46
1:30 duration290 words

The Art of Hooking Readers

Insights into the important elements of beginning a novel and the evolution of the author’s writing process over time.

"What matters at the start of the book, hooking people in, setting the scene. I I would say if you looked at my early books, I did have the the trigger. Um to me, it's like a slingshot. You you have so..."

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54:46 - 57:49
3:03 duration549 words

Finding Momentum in Storytelling

Discusses the balance between planning and intuitively discovering a story's direction as it unfolds.

"So, page 30, walk me through I don't know what do you without giving too many details about the book if you don't want to, but like where are you at on page 30 in the book? You got a general sense of ..."

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57:49 - 59:20
1:31 duration300 words

TV vs. Books: Storytelling Differences

A discussion of the different narrative techniques in TV and books, focusing on the limitations and possibilities of each medium.

"Yeah. I mean, you're unique in that out of all the writers I know who've had their work commissioned into movies, TV shows, you seem to be just about the most involved in the on-screen stuff. And my q..."

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59:20 - 1:00:51
1:31 duration389 words

Visual Storytelling vs. Imagination

Explores the differences in narrative techniques between books and visual media, and the author's perspective on storytelling.

"Tell me more about TV is about what you're doing. Books are a little bit more about what you're thinking. >> Yeah, it's just it's visual storytelling and and it also one of the hesitations. It looks l..."

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1:00:51 - 1:03:53
3:02 duration308 words

The Writer's Room Experience

Insight into the collaborative process of writing for TV, comparing it to the solitary nature of novel writing.

"What's a Hollywood writer's room like? Did you do that? Were you in a writer room sort of sitting around or was everyone just sort of going solo and then you'd come together and and edit together? Wha..."

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1:03:53 - 1:06:56
3:03 duration220 words

Learning from Raymond Chandler

Reflects on the influence of Raymond Chandler's writing, particularly how he captures the essence of a city through characters.

"We talked about Raymond Chandler a little bit, but what is it about his novels, his work, his writing that inspired you so much? >> I think it was, you know, I grew up in Florida and I read his work l..."

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1:06:56 - 1:08:28
1:32 duration351 words

Teaching the Craft of Writing

Explores the author's thoughts on teaching writing, emphasizing the importance of consistent practice in becoming a better writer.

"So, tell me this. If you were invited to a college, you got a semester to teach a course to say, "Hey, this is this is how you do what I've kind of writing that I've figured out how to do." How do you..."

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1:08:28 - 1:11:42
3:14 duration598 words

The Impact of Writing Backgrounds

Discusses the advantages of coming from nontraditional backgrounds, such as journalism or law, when pursuing a career in fiction writing.

"you know, it's funny talking to you, talking to Lee Child. Lee Child worked in TV for few decades I think it was you worked in journalism. I don't know maybe there's something about this genre in part..."